More Feedback

We got some extra feedback from our teachers and peers after asking them to watch out film after making a few amendments. These were there comments for more improvement: 

• We need to look at pur titles research and pit the titles in the right order
• They need to be 2-3 seconds each
• Part of the voice over doesn't make sense so we will delete the part saying she want to 'achieving my memories'
• More photographic effects- freeze frames before they play
• Sort music out- they change to quickly so it doesn't make sense 
• Bowling alley and ice hockey shots are too long so we need to delete a few seconds off each

Once we changed and improved our film by adding these we were ready to hand in our final draft of Amnesia.