Before we left to shoot we asked our teacher and some peers to give us some feedback on our ideas as this would help us with the genre and the actual construction of putting the film ideas together. We also wanted some feedback on the titles within the scrapbook as we were finding this difficult.
Mr Amato- 'The genre is confusing especially the titles which don't seem to match the genre, aside from this it is a creative, original idea.'
He advised that we add drawings, doodles and pictures do the background of our scrapbook.
In response to his feedback we have tweaked our genre slightly, it is now more a teen drama than a mystery film. The titles were too quirky to be associated with the mystery genre.
Issy Payne- 'When filming the memories Libby will have to wear different clothes to show they are in the past, other than that it is a good original idea'
In response to this we realised she was right that Libby will have to wear different clothing when filming the memories or it won't be obvious that it is in the past.
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